In this episode of Line Edits, we take a close look at a story about roadside assistance and consider some basics of dialogue and the idea of presenting experience to your readers in a way that corresponds to the way they would receive that experience in real life.

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  • Brian ORear
    9:25 AM, 20 November 2019

    Hi Jonathan- I’m a brand new member, and this is the first piece I’ve listened to. Fascinating. Thank you for going through the process in detail. I love the way you have explained the reasoning behind each edit, and perhaps more importantly how you’ve included recommended solutions to improve the writing.

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